The month is moving along and I'm typing along. I didn't type much today, but what today's scene brought out was pretty nuts. I'll give you my unedited excerpt. After November, I'll be editing all of this (I hope). It may not make sense, but that's okay. I'll just say that people are being offered an injection that will transform their DNA and make them perfect humans with perfect health and they will never die of sickness or old age. What they don't know is that the nanobots being injected into them also make the people programmable. At this point in the story, most everyone on the planet got this injection to avoid another pandemic - since they just survived one that killed 25% of the human population.
There are a minority of people who did not get the injection, and are now living in hiding and hungry. They are scared of what the injection has done to people they knew. That's because all of the people who got the shot are now always busy and talking very highly of Geoff (the inventor of the juice). The world has flipped upside down, because the "enlightened" ones (as they call themselves and is also what Geoff calls them) refuse to give food to anyone who is not enlightened.
So this scene here is after a group of unmarked - or uninjected - people have been brought to meet Geoff and have been fed a nice hearty meal. They were shown a video of what mankind is accomplishing with their enlightenment and new, eternal life. Many of the people watching already decided to get the shot. Now we are at a scene where these are the ones who refuse to get it still. So, here it is:
By the end, there were maybe five percent of the original nonbelievers still left. Geoff would make his offer one more time.
“Do you want to join the rest of humanity?”
These were the stubborn ones. They insisted that they did not want any part of the strange brainwashing. They’d call Geoff names and say that he’s enslaving people. At this point, Geoff would show them Lucifer. Lucifer would appear, floating above everyone in the room. He looked just like many of the paintings of Jesus. He looked loving and peaceful. Many people would let their guards down when they saw this site. He was shining and looking around, directly at everyone. People would start to think it was some kind of trick. Then Lucifer would talk. He'd say, "Peace be with you, my children." It was a very confusing moment for these people.
"Why do you call yourself Lucifer?" someone would ask.
"Lucifer simply means 'light bearer.' That is who I am. I am that I am. There is no other God besides me. It was me who brought you here. My sheep hear my voice and they follow me. Come, my sheep. I have been preparing a new home for you. Now is the time to take possession of your inheritance. The universe is yours. I have given Geoff the blessing of providing a way to give you a new body and a new soul. You do not yet understand it because you are in your old self."
"How do we know you are really God? You could simply be a creation of Geoff's. Maybe some sort of hologram."
"Oh no, children. I would never allow such deception. Here. Come. Touch my hands. Touch my body."
Then Lucifer would descend onto the floor and people would slowly approach him. He would touch them and they would touch him. It was a miracle. He is real!
"Look. If you still doubt, step out onto the patio."
There was a large sliding glass door that went out onto a big outdoor patio on the roof. Everyone walked out, following Lucifer.
"Watch me."
He then rose above the crowd, going higher toward the clouds. He'd even get larger and a bright light would shine from him. Suddenly, a loud cracking thunder would invade everywhere, putting fear and awe into the hearts of the onlookers. Then you could see what looked like angels surrounding him, praising him, singing and dancing.
One of the nonbelievers shouted, "You are the deceiver! This is a lie!"
In an instant, Lucifer looked at him, pointed and a burst of flames enveloped the person in a flash. He was gone as quickly as he spoke. All that was left was a little burnt mark on the ground where he stood. At this point, most of the nonbelievers dropped and worshiped him. It was too much. How could anyone doubt after that? Yet, still there were doubters. Geoff escorted the doubters into another room where they were secretly processed like cattle to make meat for the next hungry crowd that will go through same test. All the rest who finally decided to make the plunge lined up to receive their Miracure. Lucifer would come down and individually congratulate them and welcome them to the new life.

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Soylent green is people! "secretly processed like cattle to make meat for the next hungry crowd"? :-)
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LOL! I never heard of that movie! :) "They're going to be processing us like cattle!"
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